(Photo taken by Koch) I'm interested in a statement of Kenneth Koch’s from
an interview with David Shapiro in 1972: “
I like opera,” he says,
because you can celebrate anything. You can open the window and say: ‘The window is open. The sun is shining. My hand is on the window, and I love you.’ And somehow the music can make that beautiful enough.There’s a lot to say about this little preference of Koch’s. First, the sort of ridiculousness of what he likes: he likes a simple action being sung over and above the action itself. There’s something superfluous about the singing. This indeed is precisely what constitutes the singing’s being a celebration, being something operatic: there is a sort of meaningless, dumb pleasure in the act, in the music that carries what is said just a bit beyond its literality.
But—and here is the crucial thing that allows me to refine a little what I’m getting at—there isn’t really an act itself, without this pleasure, without this superfluity. When we see the celebration at the window Koch describes, we don’t see an act with this celebration pasted on top of it. We just see the act of celebration. It’s all one fluid movement: the celebration, the pleasure, the superfluity is the action itself. Another way to put this is that, at the window, we have at the same time an act bathetic—this sort of anti-climactic, ridiculous superfluity of the celebration—and an act that is rapturous—full of pleasure, and in fact purely pleasure, absolute and abandoned to its own movement. It’s all a lot like an orgasm, if you’ll permit this leap in logic: a sort of expenditure of vital energy at the peak of its concentration. But it is an orgasm that we’re always having, such that orgasm, this sort of celebratory, operatic expenditure, becomes coextensive with action itself. Again, the superfluity isn’t something extraneous, even though it seems that way: like the redundancy of opera, it doesn’t come from outside to give us some extra pleasure, but remains something that we can only modulate, something of which we can only have more or less.
This is puzzling, to say the least: in fact, in one of his
New Addresses, Koch describes orgasms precisely in this manner:
It seemed
Puzzling that we had you
Or rather that you
Could have us, in a way-“To Orgasms,” in
The Collected Poems of Kenneth Koch. New York: Knopf, 2005. 623-4. Hereafter cited parenthetically as CP. I won’t note line numbers for now, because that would involve a lot of counting, but I’ll get around to it sometime.
So too it seems puzzling that we can have the celebration, the saying of “The window is open,” and that the act, the opening of the window, has us celebrating, singing, in a way. There is a sort of exchange where both the acting and the being acted—the transitivity and intransitivity—run into each other at once, so that we just get the whole operatic, celebratory action. In other words, puzzled, we nevertheless
get some action.
I won’t say that this little phrase that we often use in a different context—a phrase I use not only because it gets at the peculiar nature of operatic or orgasmic action, but because, as we will see, it inscribes itself in a network of crass, stupid heterosexuality which plagues Koch’s work—I won’t say that this phrase can sum up Koch’s amazingly varied oeuvre. But I will say that it sums up a constant concern of that oeuvre. Or, instead of “constant concern” I should say that all this activity, vital energy, ridiculousness, and puzzlement involved in getting some action—understood in the wide sense of acting in a way that also “acts you” which I have just tried to give this odd phrase—constitute a sort of structure. Or, rather, since “structure” sounds too determining, a sort of Derridian texture—that is, something structuring and unstructured at once, a consistency that varies itself wherever it is attempted to be seen—that runs through the work of Kenneth Koch. This consistency is not exactly something I can say definitively exists. But at the very least it can be elaborated as a concept of action that drives Koch’s poetics, as the result—a result that is nothing other than the language of the poems themselves—of the way he uses and abuses language.
Now, in elaborating this celebratory, orgasmic consistency of the language of Koch, am I just coming up with a more expansive way to say that Koch is really a dramatic poet? That he makes a show of himself speaking? Perhaps. Koch seems indeed to many people to be a type of poet that is only good if he comes up with a catchy setup for a poem, a situation in which his words can gain an extra edge, a bit more showiness due to the context and the ironic distance to that context that they both create and inhabit, not unlike Browning. I use the vague word “setup” and make this reference to Browning because it’s not exactly form that is at issue here in Koch or in Browning’s monologues. Rather, it’s all the requirements of a particular performance: issues of content—like action, motive etc.—but also that of form—exposition, arrangement and tone especially—insofar as they interfuse and unfold before you on the stage that is the poem. Indeed, you can understand some of his great poems very well in this way: “The Departure from Hydra” (CP 156-171) is a great example, since it has a small cast of characters—Margaret, Norris, and Peter—and a narrative voice that gains some ironic distance from the voice of Koch—distance in which it can show itself a little, perform its oddness. When we read the following lines, somber and brooding, Eliot-like, over a pretty trifling incident (putting one’s stuff on a mule to be carried up a hill), we can’t help but enjoy it as a certain specimen of personality, not as a serious exhortation to also feel sorry for the mule:
I passed a mule—some men were loading up
His fellow-mule with packets—and I stared
At his wide eyes and his long hard flat nose
Or face, at which he turned away his eyes
And stamped his right hoof nervously. I felt
Guilty, a member of a higher species
Deliberately using my power against
A natural inferior because
Really I was afraid that he might kick
When I came past; but when he seemed upset
Then I felt guilty (CP, 156).
It is as if the narrator is simply out looking for the moment when he can say, truly, “then I felt guilty.” It is as if this was the last refuge for meaning for him for “solidity,” as he says (156), pleasure in life, in other things, being somewhat impossible. The poem continues as the narrator analyzes the reasons for Peter’s actions (he was feeling somewhat sullen, it seems, after Norris declined him on his offer to take a hiking trip of another Grecian isle, to which Norris originally agreed—already we see how sort of boring and useless it is to recount all these details, in the end), and meditates on all the minutia of the Peter’s sensibility, eventually tracing the whole incident back to old platitudes about Nordic or English blood versus Southern vivacity.
I’ll return to this poem momentarily, but I’ll note first that it would be too restrictive, I think, to think of this poem as a sort of drama, and Koch himself as a dramatic poet—thus I am hunting for something that is more evasive of these generic labels, something that could be otherwise than a genre.
(Note: The word “camp” comes to mind, but, though I don’t have reasons for rejecting it totally, I will at least keep it in abeyance for now, since it seems at once a little too precise and a little too general—though it does work outside a rigid notion of genre, I think, and so I might just in the end be describing campiness. I have the feeling though that if we were to put this word in play, we’d find that Koch would be flattening out campiness into something more boringly straight, if only because he would be making camp out of a sort of Eliot-style modernism and a sort of machismo heterosexuality. These two things just seem more resistant to camp and dull it down, bring it closer to a simple, mean form of satire. I want to take this form and show what it is doing above and beyond satire, so I have to come close to camp, therefore. But I want to somehow thread the needle between them.) It would not be restrictive necessarily because Koch wrote poems wildly different from “The Departure from Hydra,”—that is, because there are counterfactuals out there, poems that are just not dramatic—but because this erases how Koch has his own concerns over and above the performance he might be putting on—namely, that particular active, operatic texture he brings about, that makes his poems celebrations. And this is why from the beginning I’ve also avoided parody as something that could pin down the particular gift Koch has for coming up with a great situation, a particular voice he can exhibit and exhaust. This is probably the more popular way to approach him, because it lays stress on his being comic, silly, and light. But Koch isn’t totally parodic: he doesn’t have an end or aim in the way that parody does. And this is true even when he is being arguably parodic, like in “The Departure from Hydra.”
How? Well, the answer will not only show that this isn’t parody, but that this isn’t drama either: the poem also does something crucial, something serious, to a conception of life, and so doesn’t have its end just in displaying just the characters. At some point the ironic distance breaks down and we’re left to ponder the result of this whole performance. Now, I’ll specify that point in a second, but let me be more precise. Of course drama, if not parody, can say something serious as well as be dramatic or be parodic. But I did not claim that the poem said something that made the ironic distance break down. I said it does something, and that makes all the difference.
And here is the point, so you can see what I mean. The speaker is reflecting on the enthusiastic outburst that Peter displayed by suggesting that he and Norris go on their walk, and that this outburst was tinged with a sort of neurotic hyper-enthusiasm more than a healthy, southern exuberance:
This sort of thing, however, often happens
To people from Northern countries, not just Peter,
And perhaps if one is English, Norse, or Swedish,
Danish, Finnish, Swiss or North American,
One cannot avoid a certain amount of tension,
A certain quavering in the hand which reaches
For a ripe peach or the shoulder of a girl,
One whom, as one walks back from going swimming,
One thinks that one could eat, she’s so delicious,
But only thinks it for a little while
(This thought itself is such a Northern one!
A Southerner would think about a place
Where he could go and jump on top of her)… (CP, 158).
This thought gets completed in the last lines of the poem: “Deep thoughts make helpless/ Men for small undertakings” (CP, 161). On the one hand, this is a lot like Koch’s more “didactic” poems on poetry, like “The Art of Poetry,” or even “One Train Hides Another.” You get the sense there that the speaker really is saying something that he really believes about the cause of Peter’s actions and about people more generally, just as the speaker, in those other poems, is really saying something he believes about poetry. On the other, if you read that back into the poem, it doesn’t give you anything. The statement just is there: at most it would add on another level of irony or parody, but—so what? You already have enough of those. So it just sits there and is more done—just enounced—than said. You can still try and call this drama, but at some point it just doesn’t matter what is said, but rather that and how it is said: at some point we just stop being interested in the display of the character, its quirks and its foresightedness, and we see the pure unfolding of the words before us, regardless of their meaning.
In the end, this sort of meaningless action of the poem, of irony that you don’t know what to do with, but that happens or is done anyway, makes the status of the text more similar to something like “Poems by Ships at Sea” (CP, 478-480) rather than a parody, or a dramatic monologue. Here, given the wonderfully brief and witty pretext—“
It was not known that ships at sea wrote poetry. Now it is known” (478)—we find that odd knack Koch has for stepping into a certain voice, a certain situation, and letting that voice speak for itself—that is, celebrate itself, act itself out—but both the dramatic quality is reduced, and more importantly the process seems more positive than the sort of parody that Koch usually gets compared with—parody that is closer to satire, I should say, to a cutting down of someone else. Even the more naïve-sounding, rhyming, more formal lyric of the USS United States does not seem to really stage a voice, does not seem to progress so that we laugh at its inability to see beyond its own personality or character, even as it gathers its creativity from its being a performance of the setup:
AMERICAN FOAM
By the USS United States, United States Navy
You can talk about the Banda’s crazy waters
Where mermaids splash around and kiss and comb
You can yak about the Andaman and Flores
But there’s nothing like American foam.
You can say I wish that I were in the Tasman
Or that the Laptev froze me to a stone
But I will tell you, lads, that there is nothing
As soothing and as cooling as the foam
That slaps my keel when I am in Penobscot
Or Tampa Bay, or, when I’m heading home,
The West Atlantic and the East Pacific
Or Puget Sound, or Norton, close to Nome.
There’s nothing like the feel of U.S. water
It’s straight ad sharp and clear and it alone
Can make a ship feel she is Ocean’s daughter
Carried upon her parent’s shoulders home.
(probably) Tasman Sea, 1930sKoch plays around with the setup, and he acts, but he doesn’t fully dramatize: if we must say he parodies, he parodies only in the positive, performative sense of this word—never wholly to satirize. The poetry doesn’t have that end to it, because that would restrict it to being something that means—it would erase the power of the language to also just happen.
So, I think in the end I’m not saying that Koch is a dramatic poet. The challenge however has allowed me to refigure (hopefully with more precision) what I’ve said about the orgasm as the conception of action or activity in Koch’s poetry. It’s clear that the only real way these two poems—“Poems by Ships at Sea” (and I might have chosen “In Bed,” which looks even more different) and “The Departure from Hydra”—can seem similar is because the point, for Koch, is not to stage something, or mock it, but just to let the words do what they do, to let them occur or act. Now, we have to qualify this with attention to what results, for we are now being more specific about the particular material that makes up the performance of Koch—that is, language: the words do what they do, but the poem does not become a medium for some inner voice. That is, the language is out there: we don’t see through the words to the performer who happens to use them like we would see through a character to an actor on stage. In short, the words don’t have an arbitrary, or chance status, because Koch is not their source, that to which they must always be ascribed. On the other hand, the poem does not becomes an object with a voice or activity of its own: it isn’t objective, it isn’t only just a thing there. In other words, you do look for where they are emitted from. The words do not work to establish themselves as self-contained, like an artifact. The point is to let the words act, and remain effusive—to let the words act in a way which is
even strangely at odds, I think, with drama. This has pushed my argument farther. I merely was trying to distinguish Koch from drama, but now I am saying that the sort of performance in his poems is at odds with drama—somehow incompatible with it or different from it in essence. How? It has to do with this origin of the words, that makes them not have the status of accidental emissions of a source—that is, a medium—nor, and at the same time, let them constitute themselves by establishing their own origin in themselves like an artifact. Where is this origin, to which the words are ascribed but which does not constitute them fully? They are ascribed to the setup, which is part of the language. Because this source is the setup, which lies outside the verse proper like a preface to a work, the words do need to be ascribed to something. But at the same time, because this setup is merely an occasion for the writing of the verse, it doesn’t make sense to say that the poem is a hermetically sealed unit that is only responsible for itself.
Another way of putting all this is that the problem Koch’s work brings to the fore is one of trust. Koch is easy to trust, despite all your efforts to get around his ironies, parodies, comedy or what have you. This is why we want to say he just finds forms to insert himself into—and why this characterization is a bit wrong, I think. For if we can’t trust him directly, we want to trust his staging of the thing. But what is really the case is that Koch has nothing to trust: the words just act, are there.
So, if we look at “The Art of Love,” for example (CP, 276-298), it isn’t a parody, even as it is—because there’s just a celebration of the particular mode—I hesitate again to call it a form or a content. Koch gets at the crucial thing about this poem right away—that what interests us about a piece like this is the speaker and the occasion. So what happens is that we take a certain ironic distance from him, but Koch already catches us at this and makes us think once again about how to regard the words that are being said and whether they really are emanating from some source—that is, are really a medium: this is the whole function of the end of the “
rolling like a wheel” passage. At the moment that the speaker says, “forgive me,” and at this moment actually questions the validity of ascribing anything at all with legitimacy to the setup of the poem. So where we begin to take a certain distance that would be proper to parody, surely, but also to drama, Koch forces us to go one step further, and by revealing that the process isn’t that of an artifact—that it questions even its own setup—so that we must get rid of the notion of our distance from a real source of the words altogether:
Well, you can roll her like like a wheel, though I doubt she’ll approve of it,
Women rarely do, I knew one once, though, who did. For
This of course you use the right hand right ankle left
Hand left ankle arrangement, using splints on both sides of each
Knot so that the limbs will stay in wheel-position. Now that she
Looks like that which makes a chariot roll, roll her! If this hurts her,
Soothe her a little by kissing her all around, saying
“Ah my lovely wheel, when over a bumb, did it?” and so on,
Until she finally is resigned to being your wheel, your dear beloved one
And is eager to be rolled about by you. Small objects placed on the floor
Will give you brief twinges of sadistic energy and speed up your wheeling.
I suggest ending by wheeling her out an opened door
Which you then close and stab yourself to death. This procedure, however, is rare.
I was carried away. Forgive me. The next chapters will be much more sane (CP, 280).
But will they? Because, as far as the words are concerned, does it matter?
(Note: What is so disturbing and creepy about the poem—as we noted in class—is precisely the fact that it means too much beyond this activity of language: in the end, the poem about nailing a woman to a wall is just satirical, and in bad taste. But this isn’t coextensive, I think, with the project of Koch insofar as language is concerned. I’m not trying to be an apologist for Koch, of course, but merely note that what moves the poem is what he is doing with language and the setup. When Koch veers away from this, it just becomes—and this is the case with his other, less controversial poems too, like “Variations on a Theme of William Carlos Williams” (CP, 135)—crass satire. The vulgar aspect of Koch and the more sophisticated project are connected, though, as we will see, though a concern or anxiety that haunts this activity of language.) The poem becomes just action, celebration, pleasure in one. The words don’t have an origin, at the same time as they are just like words that have an origin—they “are had” by something that isn’t them, at the same time as the poem “has” them.
As you can see, I’d like to inscribe this back into some language of orgasm and getting some action with which I started. The sort of drive of the words, what pushes them on and makes them occur one after the other, doesn’t remain entirely free floating and external, as it would in satire: for Koch it remains something essential about the work of language and action in general, which, for him, avoids being mediated or being artifactual at the same time as it is both—just as the orgasm is something that merely is had (it is a medium) and something that has itself (it is contained) at the same time. One could say his poetry is a refiguring of how we think of action, and a modeling of it upon the orgasm or at least along vital lines.
But why vital lines? This is the question with which I will conclude. Why the orgasm? Aren’t we just talking about a structure that can take its paradoxical form anywhere? I’d like to suggest that it is because Koch thinks of how the action of language happens as something energetic, as a sort of charge that can be expended, that we have to cast this paradox as one within the vital, within the orgasmic.
For, up to now, we might think of this model of action merely as something language does, not as something that language can stored up. The orgasm is had and has itself, it gets its action, and that is it; an action just performs itself, and is over. But Koch thinks that this doesn’t allow for any sort of continuity between actions: even if they don’t emanate from somewhere, poems do emanate instead of not emanate, and this difference means that even the pure performance that is the poem—and not the drama—itself must have come from somewhere. It must come from the collected result of all of these emanations—as what is built up over time through them. So he says, in “Energy in Sweeden” (444):
Those were the days
When there was so much energy in and around me
I could take it off and put it back on, like clothes
That one has brought only for a ski trip
But then finds that one is using every day
Because every day is like a ski trip…
This describes the orgasm, the sort of just stepping into and stepping out of an action, which means it has you and you have it at the same time. But then, he continues, after relating how he meets six young women in a boat in Sweeden,
It seemed to me I should have done something at the time,
To have used all that energy. Lovemaking is one way to use it and writing is another.
Both maybe are overestimated, because the relation is so clear.
But that is probably human destiny and I’m not going to go against it here.The conception of action, of the unfolding of energetic activity, has changed. It no longer is a garment, or like an orgasm, but is something that has to be able to be collected together to make some ultimate sense. It is this tendency that invades the conception of action that Koch’s use of language develops, and which, I think, takes it over from time to time. It is, indeed, what pulls this orgasmic, celebratory superfluity out of the language and gives it a point, which usually makes the poems descend from their more performative status into the sphere of satire. This is often what gives his poems their force—that force that makes us want to read his statements on poetry as statements about his own poetry, adding one more level of irony instead of seeing that there is only irony, only performance, only distance, and that this is something essential to language,
because language acts.